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May 09, 2010
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Sick of Religion? Me Too!
do you believe in god
why do you believe in god
is it because your easily led
and you take the word of some
vicar who quotes from a bible
or because you've got to
or you'd be beaten black and blue
and for those of us who
do ask awkward questions
and are told you must have faith
don't you find that patronising
even bordering on the childish side
as for me
well
I don't believe in god
never have done if I'm honest
what I do believe in is also unprovable
I can't magic out some foolproof evidence
so I keep my beliefs private
and you know what
I wish the christians and the jews
and the muslims and any other religion
I havent mentioned could do the bloody same
please keep your faith private
go on just give it a try
keep jesus to yourself
and mohammed too
and those of the jewish faith
and those of you who are satanists
keep your good news to yourself
and let us heathens and kafirs
infidels and atheists
have some well deserved peace and quiet!!!
Lenny Gazbowski(C)2010
why do you believe in god
is it because your easily led
and you take the word of some
vicar who quotes from a bible
or because you've got to
or you'd be beaten black and blue
and for those of us who
do ask awkward questions
and are told you must have faith
don't you find that patronising
even bordering on the childish side
as for me
well
I don't believe in god
never have done if I'm honest
what I do believe in is also unprovable
I can't magic out some foolproof evidence
so I keep my beliefs private
and you know what
I wish the christians and the jews
and the muslims and any other religion
I havent mentioned could do the bloody same
please keep your faith private
go on just give it a try
keep jesus to yourself
and mohammed too
and those of the jewish faith
and those of you who are satanists
keep your good news to yourself
and let us heathens and kafirs
infidels and atheists
have some well deserved peace and quiet!!!
Lenny Gazbowski(C)2010
— Lenny of Cohen, May 09, 2010
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Critiques
adjei agyei-baah
16 years 2 months ago
It has always been better
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Lenny
weirdelf
16 years 2 months ago
[applause]
Jonathan Moore
16 years 2 months ago
Wrong
Candlewitch
16 years 2 months ago
Hello
barbsdad2003
16 years 2 months ago
You ...
Jonathan Moore
16 years 2 months ago
Excellent message, minor flow issues
barbsdad2003
16 years 2 months ago
Jonathan ...
Jonathan Moore
16 years 2 months ago
Agreed
shirley harrison
16 years 2 months ago
Lorra lorra Guts!
Kailashana
16 years 2 months ago
Thank you Lenny of Cohen. I
Lenny of Cohen
16 years 2 months ago
What? No Lions!
weirdelf
16 years 2 months ago
feel sorry for a man of courage, intelligence and integrity?
Kailashana
16 years 2 months ago
I’m afraid Lenny was
Jonathan Moore
16 years 2 months ago
You can tell a private discussion
Jonathan Moore
16 years 2 months ago
What Can I say
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Annie
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Annie
shirley harrison
16 years 2 months ago
The colour Purple!
Jonathan Moore
16 years 2 months ago
You are
pleiades
16 years 2 months ago
good grief..is there anyone
Kailashana
16 years 2 months ago
Hi p, Both Jonathan and I
pleiades
16 years 2 months ago
A...you say the more religious
Kailashana
16 years 2 months ago
;-)“An unexamined life is
weirdelf
16 years 2 months ago
The critique of the poem was presented
Tam the Chanter
16 years 2 months ago
Religious banter
Jonathan Moore
16 years 2 months ago
We are separated
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
in the middle of belief is a lie
Beauregard
16 years 2 months ago
I second Jess, Jonathan and Kail's critiques, Lenny
Kailashana
16 years 2 months ago
You are *young* enough to be
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