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Weakness(There is a Answer)

Weakness is a poison,
That will surly destroy your soul.
I will tear you into a million piece,
No longer will you be whole.

Weakness will take  you hostage,
Till you feel you can not fight,
It will drag you to the darkness,
And block you from the light.

The weak, they often crumble,
And they wallow in their sorrow,
Trying to forget the sadness of today,
And dreading what comes tomorrow.

The devil wants you to be weak,
Because it always leads to sin,
So take a hold of the power you have,
And never let him win.

You cannot let life defeat you,
When trouble rears its ugly head,
You must find the power within,
To fight these problems instead.

Then when you feel it is way to much,
Remember God is always there,
He is listening and watching,
He will answer your every prayer.

For He is the King of Kings,
The pillar of all that's  light,
And through the love He has for you,
You will always win the fight.

— greeneyes, May 08, 2010

About This Poem

About the Author

Country/Region: Colorado Springs Colorado

Favorite Poets: I love Dr. Suess! He is my favorite, I would love to write for children.

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magics02

16 years 1 month ago

Green Eyes

Amazing poetry and I am so glad to read this one tonight. You have a tender soul and you are a great poet. Never lose sight of that. Stay your course and I will be back..loved it Love, Mona xoxox TIME well spent is TIME well lived
Seren

Seren

16 years 1 month ago

Dear Elizabeth

Are you musically inclined? you always have such wonderful rhythm and todays no different have a happy mothers day hun its mothers day here already lol love and big hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
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mantiscepter

16 years 1 month ago

The Lord

Nice writing, I enjoyed your confidence, the power within the words that are so true to me. Just loved the whole write. good to see you out here iove John'
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mantiscepter

16 years 1 month ago

The Lord

Nice writing, I enjoyed your confidence, the power within the words that are so true to me. Just loved the whole write. good to see you out here iove John'
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scribbler

16 years 1 month ago

weakness

very easily read with a good topic strength comes not from lack of weakness,but from overcoming weakness
loved

loved

16 years 1 month ago

Weakness what!

The meek, Ah! The weak Can rarely make it Any week They all fail prematurely In whatsoever they seek… So be not weak And Shoulder your responsibilities bravely As usual you aren’t In the least At all so very meek