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May 08, 2010
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Smiles From The Grateful
The mute in his cell is dog bark coughing.
Junkies file into the toilets, shy and apologetic
or hungry with curses.
There’s the smell of cask wine and a war of bad radio.
Blood spotted cotton balls clog the drains.
Tiny cigarette carcases disintegrate unfiltered.
Food scabs the concrete.
An ex-con complains that his city sleeping possie
has been disturbed by burglars.
“It ain’t right” he tells us.
An old hooker limps out like coffee dregs,
her once sold beauty gone like dust.
The delivery man is cancer thin,
lives on exhaust and trusting kindness.
The key code is 1937, so pogrom appropriate,
everything is locked down.
I sweep and clean like an old trustee.
Smiles from the grateful
and the piano music from the church hall
remind me it’s not prison.
— Ross Hamilton Hill, May 08, 2010
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Critiques
magics02
16 years 1 month ago
wow Ross
Ross Hamilton Hill
15 years 12 months ago
just had a good stare at your photo
magics02
15 years 12 months ago
Your too funny Ross
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
great write ross
Ross Hamilton Hill
16 years ago
hi judy
seabhac
16 years ago
Ross I really like this
Ross Hamilton Hill
15 years 12 months ago
hi
Shango007
16 years ago
Reminds me of Kurt
Race_9togo
16 years ago
Excellence
Ross Hamilton Hill
16 years ago
Hi Jim
pleiades
16 years ago
terrific descriptive
Ross Hamilton Hill
16 years ago
Hi there distant star
Seren
16 years ago
Dear Ross
themoonman
16 years ago
Ross...
Ross Hamilton Hill
15 years 12 months ago
hi mate
Kailashana
16 years ago
Flesh is enough of a prison
Ross Hamilton Hill
15 years 12 months ago
a belated thanks
Seren
15 years 12 months ago
Dear Ross
Ross Hamilton Hill
15 years 12 months ago
speechless?
Seren
15 years 12 months ago
Ross many many years ago i
Seren
15 years 12 months ago
P.S you may remember my singing teacher
Ross Hamilton Hill
15 years 11 months ago
Hi
brittle light
15 years 11 months ago
this piece has just upped the game
Ross Hamilton Hill
15 years 11 months ago
thanks al