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May 08, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Mother’s Day Tomorrow

Mother’s Day Tomorrow

 


My senior Cambridge teacher

 

Was pregnant

 

But even till her last days of labour

 

She walked to school

 

To put us through

 

The final exams

 

She lost her unborn child

 

And

 

We wept…

 

She didn’t

 

She was our mother.

 

 

 

Happy Mother’s day’s remembrance

 

To all mothers

 

All would be mothers

 

And

 

Those who thus sacrificed

 

 

— loved, May 08, 2010

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loved

loved

16 years 1 month ago

sad yes and NO

But that lady Was more than a mother For me For if she hadn’t sacrificed For her kids like me, Today I would never have Ever met thee Love is between human beings Not necessarily kith and kin I have many not worth mentioning… But that memory of the lady Till today is as fresh even now As is mom’s day, So it isn’t that sad, somehow
R

raj

16 years 1 month ago

That's what makes a Mother

you have brought out the "sacrifice" quality of Mothers so very well in few verses.. nice reembrances...i join you Loved in sending greetings & respects to all mothers.. raj (sublime_ocean)
loved

loved

16 years 1 month ago

thanks

thanks again friend
xena465

xena465

16 years 1 month ago

Well narrated

A beautiful write for all mothers on Mother's Day...well done Loved. Rosina xena465
loved

loved

16 years 1 month ago

ttttttthanks

ur a loved and exshellent poeterrrrry urshelf
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 1 month ago

Your poem exemplifies how a

Your poem exemplifies how a beloved teacher can give substance and sustenance to a child, no matter how difficult and hurtful a child's home life is. Though I (missed) your poem yesterday, (and missed the word missed now) I am glad to read it today. Blessings to you, you are loved. ~A "If you think you're free, there's no escape possible." ~ Ram Dass
loved

loved

16 years 1 month ago

ur yes ur

the personification of love those who know how to appreciate can only love thanks to you
loved

loved

16 years ago

My hats off to u

ur a very nice lady and person if u permit me to say so who is appreciative and kind and generous so much so for u i'd like to compose if u permit me to do so thanks ma'am