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theladyblue
theladyblue
May 08, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

and she still weeps rainbows...

We have plucked the Northern Lights from her eyesIn low black nights
it leaves a gaping grey void in your vision
It creeps along her face
like ghost tears trailing She stretches out before usAnd her skin is dirty Forever taintedBy our touch
— theladyblue, May 08, 2010

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theladyblue

theladyblue

16 years 1 month ago

im glad you liked this one...

I have an idea for a new project now...we shall see how they do...stay tuned and i may just have more where this came from. <3 Emarie "i read you and see…that between the pen, paper and you…there is little room for me…" ~ heart breaker~ Go Live & Get Rewarded!!! Check us out at http://www.neopoet.com/forum/20761 & the Community Calender!!!
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magics02

16 years 1 month ago

Keep working on it

It will come lady blue, just do it,lol hope you had a great day Mona xxoxo TIME well spent is TIME well lived
theladyblue

theladyblue

16 years 1 month ago

thanks mona

I fear that meter may just be the death of me...but hey at least ill die trying lol <3 Emarie "i read you and see…that between the pen, paper and you…there is little room for me…" ~ heart breaker~ Go Live & Get Rewarded!!! Check us out at http://www.neopoet.com/forum/20761 & the Community Calender!!!