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Its You

through many tears
I stare out my kitchen window
looking and longing for you
you traveled through my heart
like a whirlwind
stirring up my life
leaving everything a wreck

you made me change the way I live
and think
the things I do
and the things I want to do

I look at the world a new again
each and everyday
now my life
has life

the only thing it is missing
is you

— hobo, May 08, 2010

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shirley harrison

16 years 1 month ago

Hobo

I miss you too! wonderful poem Much love shirley harrison
M

magics02

16 years 1 month ago

Hobo my friend how are you

You write with so much compassion blessed one and I really like this one. Will be on more later to catch up bravo Mona xxoxo TIME well spent is TIME well lived
xena465

xena465

16 years 1 month ago

Boo hoo!

Made me want to cry, so lovely Hobo to have such tender feelings towards another...I'm jealous! Rosina xena465
Seren

Seren

16 years 1 month ago

Dear Hobo

Sigh just beautiful .... I am speechless bow love and big hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
loved

loved

16 years 1 month ago

Do not miss

Do not miss......anyone There is none worth On this earth Anymore Who deserves to know? Your love no more Than the one Who loves you for sure? If you haven’t anyone Then Where are you Where are you Where are you
hobo

hobo

16 years 1 month ago

please do

please do it you think this will help in anyway I am flattered
Bonitaj

Bonitaj

16 years ago

Hello Hobo

stopped by for my first visit and so glad I did. You make it clear that men too can have such strong emotions and I am certainly moved by the disclosure! THank you Bonita j