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CS
club special
May 07, 2010 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

Greek Gods Memory

Alas!
Winters black and bitter wine
Stains the chins of Dionysus children
His fathers eyes pale the grapes
upon the vine
Their frozen faces~ witness
The chorus of oblivion
— club special, May 07, 2010

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Country/Region: Colorado

Favorite Poets: William Blake, Poe, Yeats, Crowley

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poewriter58

16 years 2 months ago

Club Special

My only moderate comment is this is wonderful poetic writing and I would love to see this extended Chrys
CS

club special

16 years 2 months ago

Thank you very much Chrys. I

Thank you very much Chrys. I would like to extend this one to but sometimes it doesn't, or cant happen. Whoever or whatever put these words together inside my head is just to far down the road to hear! - -Club Special

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