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BIRTHDAY"S

 Rings around saturn
blue moons above
left to the star-light
right of this love

candle lit memories
held in a box
given with smiles
a hall-mark with socks

ties in the mail
mixed with our checks
oh what a greeting
a phone with a text

signed with an LOL
wait there's: a BING.
a following of many
just call me , don't sing

not my Forte
got caught in the Hail
of digital queries
 be better to mail

send me a letter
written by hand
slap on a stamp
send on demand

rush me your view's 
on colorful hues 
just do it from home
I'm staying here too.
— mantiscepter, May 07, 2010

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Seren

16 years 1 month ago

Dear John

I love this poem so much how lovely ... sigh you always soothe the savage side of me lol and i needed soothing today lol thanks for that hun love and hugs Jayne-Chloe p.s wish your lovely other half a wonderful mothers day x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
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mantiscepter

16 years 1 month ago

Birthdays

Again your here to push me on, and I love it when you come by to give me your views, and I' truly happy you liked this one so much. I will tell sharon that you send her a Happy Mothers day. and I Hope you get all the love you deserve also, so happy Mothers Day Love. and thanks always for being out here. Love and Hugs John.