I can Hear your Smile

I hear you smile, when you answer the phonedoesn't mater, if it's two in the mornor how bad, your day has gonea smile for me, you adorn I can feel your breathingevery time I callyour chest softly heavingthe rise and the fall your heart beat, keeping timewith the song in my heartas the rhythm and rhymepicks my emotions apart I can see the stars in your eyesI know when there are tearsyour mood, you can't disguiseI known you, too many years your words wrap around meand takes me by my armand sets my spirit freewith your youthful charm I can taste your your sweet kissas you blow it through the phonegood night, leaving me to missthe greatest love I've ever known copyright 5-6-10 huey horton (hippiepoet69)

— hippiepoet69, May 07, 2010

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Alice Ember

16 years 1 month ago

Hmmmm...

I love this. I'm not sure as to why but, I really do. Nice work. Saeva Scaeva ( Latin) " Rampant she-devil"

hippiepoet69

16 years 1 month ago

Thanks Alice

I'm glad you like it even if you don't know why. She calls me late because she is on another time zone and she waits after 9 PM to call me, her times. She wakes me up. She says she can hear my smile. Thanks again. Take Care. huey

magics02

16 years 1 month ago

Wow Huey

Good one here and alot of heart went into this one, sensitive and loving, just like you are, How is everything going with your old flame made new again? You sure do write some nice poetry Hippie..until next time you take care friend Love,Mona TIME well spent is TIME well lived

hippiepoet69

16 years 1 month ago

Thanks Mona

She fell asleep again on me about 2 this morning. I guiss I'm really boring. We are no longer Dancing Fools. She broke off the dance and said the three magic words. Today is a special day for me. Her daughters birthday. One of the last times I seen Holly was taking some milk and diapers for Harmony. No she is not my daughter but I loved her like she was. Holly and I still have that special bond. She inspires me. But I will slow down on my writting. Or they will repext them self. I did not know if I could still write. I just wasn't inspired. Take Care and Thanks. huey

shirley harrison

16 years 1 month ago

here are your stars!

If she is that wonderful, she should be closer! and not just through the phone! shirley harrison

hippiepoet69

16 years 1 month ago

Thanks Shirley

We are working on that. She is staying with her sister and her family. So I can't stay there. She is there helping her sister at a cafe. That her sister just opened about three weeks ago. So she can't come down here. We were on Craigslist last night looking at places to live. But both of our money is limited. I'm not giving up my place here yet. Wmen the times comes I will do whatever I need to do to make it work. I will not give up my jukebox or my Coca cola Tiffany hanging cafe light. LOL Thanks. Take Care. huey

xena465

16 years 1 month ago

Great one Huey

A beautiful romantic poem and flows wonderfully. Rosina xena465

scribbler

16 years 1 month ago

can hear your smile

what a good description of what other than words can transmit over a phone. keep writing and rhyming

hippiepoet69

16 years 1 month ago

Thanks Scribbler

She tells me she can hear my smile. Even if she wakes me up late at night. That's the only time we really get to talk. We have both looked for each other off and on over the last 28 years. I have loved her 30 years. I want to live your poem now. Take Care. huey

loved

16 years ago

I DON'T KNOW YOU

......but I can hear your giggle And I can see you ready With a hanky Wiping Ur tears for me As u speak soft comforting words I choke and you smoke And Mock at me And I see as u can see me smiling I can also see u gigling Now at me…

hippiepoet69

16 years ago

Thanks loved

You can see a lot in someone's voice. That is if they wear thier feelings in thier voice like I do. I just hope she can't hear the hurt. She did not return the last few times we talked. But as long as she calls me every day. I have hope. Thanks for reading my poem, And I enjoyed your little poem. Take Care. huey