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Intelligent Friend

 

Intelligent Friend



You are an intelligent friend

I am a helper of mankind,

Age is simply in ones mind

I speak to garbage guys

And

Prime Ministers

In similar vein,

One is a PM

The other a sweeper,

Garbage kind it’s all ordained.

You can add a p, prefix,

Pre

If you wish to

Good nite dreams are never true. 

Dreams come better

In day time

When people are drinking

Red wine and feeling

They’re having

One helluva time

 

 

 

 

 

— loved, May 07, 2010

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shirley harrison

16 years 1 month ago

wonderful

nicely done loved,i like dreams they interest me a great deal, i have vivid dreams every night like having 2 lives! I wouldnt say that the road sweeper was less important than the priminister to me they have the same value,lovely poem..... Much love shirley harrison
loved

loved

16 years 1 month ago

THANKS again

regards and have a good day bye see u Loved PLease pardon my typing ... i see and type
xena465

xena465

16 years 1 month ago

I'll drink to that Loved

Nice one...bottoms up with a wee rum and maybe a wee bit more...gurgle...gulp...I enjoyed that wee bit `O` rum...cheers! Rosina xena465
loved

loved

16 years 1 month ago

oooooooooooooo

as long as u enjoyed the oooooo part of it I'm two ooooo's more happy
loved

loved

16 years 1 month ago

fight ,kick and scream u say

... that's all what i do and get kicked in and out daily and i have to LOLOLOLOLO...... at my self while they enjoy all the ooooooooooooo's as perhaps u do............
greeneyes

greeneyes

16 years 1 month ago

My friend,

This was beautiful! I look foward to your words. Greeneyes
loved

loved

16 years 1 month ago

thanks

u r very nice and kind thanks for all ur support
loved

loved

16 years 1 month ago

at times i get dazed

.... how is it u have green eyes ? most of us have brown and many mostly have blue............
B

barbsdad2003

16 years 1 month ago

Best ...

I've seen of yours. Nicely written. My opinion, of course. Take it with a grain of circumstance, if you wish. Grinning, Chuck
loved

loved

16 years 1 month ago

Best of course

....u have a best of discerning eye accross the Internet I'm glad u do see some good in me thanks
loved

loved

16 years 1 month ago

grain u said

.. i take all compliments with marble stones and engrave the lovely comments no one may perhaps like to give them again thanks sir u encourage me to consume poetry to create poetic history