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MOTHER'S HAND

MOTHER'S HAND or The Sensitivity of Hands.

Your hand it strokes your brow,

as pain and nausea reign,

distort your visions and perceptions, strain

the limits of your patient brain,

this gesture now reminds you of your mother, kind,

her soothing sweet caress,

when you were in distress and needed help,

to feel yourself again in trust.

 

Your hand goes through your hair,

parting sections softly falling,

calm possesses all your thoughts and will.

Is mother nearby still?

 

Come mother if you will, I need you now

your spirit's welcome always anyhow.

 

Within the fingers of our hands are nerves,

so sensitive to every tiny touch,

their flash of understanding goes so fast,

emotions soon react to send the message up,

to the great sieve of wisdom, knowledge

gleaned as we live,

there processed instantly to tell us what to feel.

 

Those fingers of the hand can be expressive,

can even cause a blow and be aggressive,

their grip can strangle, stop the blood in flow,

their dance seduce a man to change his path,

their point reduce one's confidence,

be dashed to shame, their shove

can cause a fall, their clap applaud, 

as fingers play their magic chords, create so much.

 

They are our hidden thoughts expressed,

our minds that give them life,

they mean so much without them, we are lost,

but most of all we need them when we wish for solace, suffering,

put together they pray for yet another day,

another way to sway the trials and strife.


 

 
— Nordic cloud, May 07, 2010

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Region, Country: Oslo and Flatdal, Norway., NOR

Favorite Poets: Too daunting this.

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Seren

Seren

16 years 1 month ago

Dear Ann

This poem just ripped a hole in me and played my heart ... speechlessly beautiful and poignant ... I dont have the right words I am sorry ... I wont be round much over the next week so if I dont see you I will email when I can ... love to you dear one love and biggest hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 1 month ago

Yes and you know. I know you know and why

Ann of Norway Yes and you know. I know you know and why, and this is to soothe the suffering of all who read it, their minds calmed by the thought of their mother's hand on their brow, always loving and giving uninhibited, unconditioned, openly sending through the fingers her all to help and heal any wounds of mind or spirit, body all. Thank you Jayne and may you feel my hand on your brow too now. Love from Ann. XXOO
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 1 month ago

Thank you, I am not a mother.

Ann of Norway And yet......I feel I was when I was working in a Kindergarten and they even called me mother many times, each one iI loved as if he/she were my own, so it wasn't far from being a mother but NOTHING can compare with that experience, I don't think, it must be so wonderful to produce a life, unbelievable, magic, yes it was something I didn't experience, but them I never found the right man to be a father, not ever, so that's why. Thank you all the same Darknlovely, your look like a mother-goddess to me! Love from Ann
loved

loved

16 years 1 month ago

ma'am

Mother’s day My senior Cambridge teacher Was pregnant But even till her last days of labour She walked to school To put us through The final exams She lost her unborn child And We wept… She didn't She was our mother. Happy Mother’s day’s remembrance To all mothers All would be mothers And Those who thus sacrificed Pardon me,kindly, for extending my brief Your superb poem, brought reverberations, as recollections, of that lady… our mother.
SH

shirley harrison

16 years 1 month ago

Stunning

I do not have a mother like that,However i do plan on being a mother like that. Dear Anne i can alsmost see your heart in this poem!wonderful,and if you are a mummy "Happy Mothers day" much love shirley harrison
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 1 month ago

.. a chord of the lullaby of life

Ann of Norway Oh here I touched a soft spot, a chord of the lullaby of life didn't I and got some lovely thoughts from my commentators, and I thank you all for them, "loved told a fine story and all of you related to it in a particularly intimate way, thank you. Love to all mother's from Ann.
chumfin

chumfin

16 years 1 month ago

greta piece Ann.

it really takes a lot of sacrifice to be a mother, they a special being different from all other humans, yes i mean my saying on this. mothers is the true picture of an endless love love mother love life. chumfin
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 1 month ago

Sounds as if you too were blessed with a great mother.

Ann of Norway All mothers must have that something special in them, but some are not sensitive to it, so sad when their own lives woud be so much richer for understanding that. Glad you feel this way about your mother Chumfin, no wonder she was kind and loving, you too look that way yourself. Love from Ann.
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 1 month ago

The imprint a mother has on

The imprint a mother has on the life she gave and the life she lived is forever, it often defines us as men & women even if we refine our memories. Lovely Ann. ~Anna "If you think you're free, there's no escape possible." ~ Ram Dass
Seren

Seren

16 years 1 month ago

I just wanted to add Ann …

I just wanted to add Ann ... you may not have physically given birth but you have enough love for a world of children ... I believe your kindergarten children where blessed to have such a kind compassionate first teacher I am sure you have left your imprint on them also ... Happy mothers day dear one love and big hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
M

mantiscepter

16 years 1 month ago

Mother

Very good write a straight out view of what is. warm and loving, kinda sad and still lovely. Love John.
xena465

xena465

16 years 1 month ago

Beautiful Mother's Day poem Ann

My mum's been gone since 1972, but every Mother's Day I still think of her. Because we were a large family we, the younger ones, didn't have much money. We used to put our pennies together and buy her flowers and a box of Milk Tray, her favourite chocolates...she cried…but a happy cry. Rosina xena465