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MOTHER'S HAND
Your hand it strokes your brow,
as pain and nausea reign,
distort your visions and perceptions, strain
the limits of your patient brain,
this gesture now reminds you of your mother, kind,
her soothing sweet caress,
when you were in distress and needed help,
to feel yourself again in trust.
Your hand goes through your hair,
parting sections softly falling,
calm possesses all your thoughts and will.
Is mother nearby still?
Come mother if you will, I need you now
your spirit's welcome always anyhow.
Within the fingers of our hands are nerves,
so sensitive to every tiny touch,
their flash of understanding goes so fast,
emotions soon react to send the message up,
to the great sieve of wisdom, knowledge
gleaned as we live,
there processed instantly to tell us what to feel.
Those fingers of the hand can be expressive,
can even cause a blow and be aggressive,
their grip can strangle, stop the blood in flow,
their dance seduce a man to change his path,
their point reduce one's confidence,
be dashed to shame, their shove
can cause a fall, their clap applaud,
as fingers play their magic chords, create so much.
They are our hidden thoughts expressed,
our minds that give them life,
they mean so much without them, we are lost,
but most of all we need them when we wish for solace, suffering,
put together they pray for yet another day,
another way to sway the trials and strife.
Critiques
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
Dear Ann
Nordic cloud
16 years 1 month ago
Yes and you know. I know you know and why
Nordic cloud
16 years 1 month ago
Thank you, I am not a mother.
Lonnie
16 years 1 month ago
A fitting Anthem to Mothers everywhere!
magics02
16 years 1 month ago
Beautiful piece here Ann
loved
16 years 1 month ago
ma'am
shirley harrison
16 years 1 month ago
Stunning
Nordic cloud
16 years 1 month ago
.. a chord of the lullaby of life
chumfin
16 years 1 month ago
greta piece Ann.
Nordic cloud
16 years 1 month ago
Sounds as if you too were blessed with a great mother.
Kailashana
16 years 1 month ago
The imprint a mother has on
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
I just wanted to add Ann …
mantiscepter
16 years 1 month ago
Mother
xena465
16 years 1 month ago
Beautiful Mother's Day poem Ann
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
the solace of hands