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May 07, 2010
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emptying my pockets beneath the skyline
write with the purest gesture of your death
in the lowered coffin of your heart write
that one bird more beautiful will still fly
in your eyes that become holes
see the destruction of steps backward
and the poverty of the soil in your face
it is i
this lost love
fuck
drink, taste
smell and forget
in the drunken magnitude of the steel spade
this lost soil of skin
rising above our heads
in the lowered coffin of your heart write
that one bird more beautiful will still fly
in your eyes that become holes
see the destruction of steps backward
and the poverty of the soil in your face
it is i
this lost love
fuck
drink, taste
smell and forget
in the drunken magnitude of the steel spade
this lost soil of skin
rising above our heads
— Orphani, May 07, 2010
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Seren
16 years 1 month ago
Powerful words B I sm
Kailashana
16 years 1 month ago
I like this (side of) Barry,