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emptying my pockets beneath the skyline

write with the purest gesture of your death
in the lowered coffin of your heart write
that one bird more beautiful will still fly
in your eyes that become holes

see the destruction of steps backward
and the poverty of the soil in your face
it is i
this lost love
fuck
drink, taste
smell and forget
in the drunken magnitude of the steel spade
this lost soil of skin
rising above our heads
— Orphani, May 07, 2010

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Seren

Seren

16 years 1 month ago

Powerful words B I sm

Powerful words B I sm speechless wow is all I can think of at the moment love and hugs JC ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 1 month ago

I like this (side of) Barry,

I like this (side of) Barry, too! Very much! Bravo! Praise! ~A "The plain man is familiar with blindness and deafness, and knows from his everyday experience that the look of things is influenced by his senses, but it never occurs to him to regard the whole world as a creation of his senses." ~ Ernst Mach