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May 06, 2010
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Lets not tell our Hearts
lets not tell my heartyou packed on a few poundsthat you loaded your cartwith almond joy and mounds he still thinks, your twenty threeand he's in his primeboth young and freetwo hearts suspended in time he still holds, a firm, shapely bodyhe's kissing his young beautyshe is still his young, little hottieand Dam she's a real cutie don't even tell him, his love is blindhe won't even listen any wayto his old foolish mindto what it has to say their age is catching up fasttheir eyesight is starting to gohair on his head, a thing of the pastand they lost their youthful glow lets keep our hearts in the darkand throw caution to the windride some rides, at the water parktwo young hearts together again copyright 5-5-10 hueyrayhorton (hippiepoet69)
— hippiepoet69, May 06, 2010
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raskin
16 years 1 month ago
This made me smile it
hippiepoet69
16 years 1 month ago
Thanks raskin
raskin
16 years 1 month ago
Still sweet, good for
scribbler
16 years 1 month ago
lets not tell our hearts