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Benjamin1987
Benjamin1987
May 06, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

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I want to swim
in the two
clear blue pools
in your head

To stare into
their shining contents
and look into
your soul
— Benjamin1987, May 06, 2010

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Region, Country: Boston, Massachusetts, USA

Favorite Poets: The Beat Generation

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Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 1 month ago

Sweet, complete in its own

Sweet, complete in its own way, though instead of *look* I'd use *see*. ~A "The plain man is familiar with blindness and deafness, and knows from his everyday experience that the look of things is influenced by his senses, but it never occurs to him to regard the whole world as a creation of his senses." ~ Ernst Mach