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May 06, 2010
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Foolish Love
Again we touched
an October day
our love seemed
so far away
not in hearts
shared by love
but by a person like me
as a sentimental does
with no affection
or hope returned
these empty arms
will be my Urn.
an October day
our love seemed
so far away
not in hearts
shared by love
but by a person like me
as a sentimental does
with no affection
or hope returned
these empty arms
will be my Urn.
— mantiscepter, May 06, 2010
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weirdelf
16 years 2 months ago
Love this!
mantiscepter
16 years 2 months ago
Foolish Love
Kailashana
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I can’t even begin to
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Foolish Love
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Foolish Love
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