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The Dank

Surrounded by what seems to be
a dankness that absorbs,
the remnants of a dignity, so frail;

that as it slowly dissipates,
what tethers hearts to souls
corrodes, causing consciences to pale.

Then pride, and all integrity
will quickly disappear,
as the greedy dank begins to take a hold;

after shredding weakened heart strings,
and robbing eyes of hope,
it creates what makes them feel so tired, and old.

With new eyes they begin to see,
the parameters, no longer clear,
seems they've lost how to discern 'tween right, and wrong;

and as each mother sheds a tear,
the vile dank just slips away,
from the carnage that remains after it's song.

Vacant lives, so conscience free
walk a dismal, fenceless road,
where the rules, and guidelines wisp into the past;

sometimes, they find their way back
but that's few, and far between,
these souls, are disintegrating fast.

I don't have any way to be
effective anymore,
the danks infectious evil has begun;

too bad about tom morrow
with it's lustre all but gone,
there can be no hope, in horizons with no sun.

— docmaverick, May 06, 2010

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Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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Critiques

DawningDaytripper

DawningDaytripper

16 years ago

Surrounded by the Dank,

Surrounded by the Dank, sounds great. JK, I am sure it was meant to imply much. I thought this was a fabulous write and greatly enjoyed it, especialy the last verse. A dawnless horizon, deep and very descriptively rich. Thanks for sharing, will try to read more. Julie D.D.