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May 05, 2010
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More the Merrier
Sky never pales of shining stars
count on them, to spread their charm
sigh for them, they will sigh for you
never ever ask "who are you"...
Fragrance of love, never does stale
longer we inhale, richer its essence
share it all, with all in love
brings more joy, like never before...
Colors of the rainbow, never do fade
they speckle our skies, in hues and shades
"try us" they say, "to paint your life"
"to mellow, your sullen moods and strife"..
Blades of grass under naked feet
do get crushed, yet cool more heels
their wounds get healed in seasoned faith
"the more we give, more we receive"..
raj (sublime_ocean)....
— raj, May 05, 2010
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Critiques
shirley harrison
16 years 1 month ago
another true beauty!
raj
16 years 1 month ago
your words are like tonic...
xena465
16 years 1 month ago
I agree with Shirley
raj
16 years 1 month ago
feels good to hear your
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
you live up to your name
raj
16 years 1 month ago
you appreciation is
raj
16 years 1 month ago
Thank you !!