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raj

More the Merrier

Sky never pales of shining stars
count on them, to spread their charm
sigh for them, they will sigh for you
never ever ask "who are you"...


Fragrance of love, never does stale
longer we inhale, richer its essence
share it all, with all in love
brings more joy, like never before...


Colors of the rainbow, never do fade
they speckle our skies, in hues and shades
"try us" they say, "to paint your life"
"to mellow, your sullen moods and strife"..


Blades of grass under naked feet
do get crushed, yet cool more heels
their wounds get healed in seasoned faith
"the more we give, more we receive"..


raj (sublime_ocean)....

— raj, May 05, 2010

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Region, Country: Somewhere in the world, IND

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shirley harrison

16 years 1 month ago

another true beauty!

sublime your poetry is wonderful. the more we give the more we receive, You could have the world! shirley harrison
xena465

xena465

16 years 1 month ago

I agree with Shirley

A beautiful write with great images Sublime. Rosina xena465
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raj

16 years 1 month ago

feels good to hear your

feels good to hear your appreciative words Rosina... wishing you smiles ...raj (sublime_ocean)...
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raj

16 years 1 month ago

you appreciation is

you appreciation is inspiring ..thank you Judy... be well..wishing you smiles.. raj (sublime_ocean)..