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Seren
Seren
May 05, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Cast in the shadow of Seven

I fell past the veils
of seven blue moons
in dreams of saffron
my line will lay soon

the miniature moments
I bottled and capped
line all the walls
in satin are wrapped

I pulled them all down
and fill up the spa
I soak in minutes
bathing in awe

In remembering times
that glowed with joy,
I am filled with a fire
and power deploys

it fills up the spaces
that grew over time,
stopped all the clocks
as divined in a rhyme

I turn the enchantress
and cast out my spell,
this dream is magic
but no harm will befell

as the threads of time
start to pass your head,
don't let your stomach
fill right up with dread

I pressed this magic
from the whitest flowers,
and mix it with myrrh
dusting the book of hours

a vial of brightness
I smear on the night
a spray of sparkles
now flow on the light

now let your mind go
you have nothing to fear
this is the dreamtime
and nothings real here

when seven blue moons
shine in the sky,
look to those orbs
and you might see me fly

— Seren, May 05, 2010

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Beyond the Black Stump..Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda, P.K.Page, W.H.Auden, to many and various to include them all ...

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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 1 month ago

Jayne, Jayne, Jayne!

I loved the enchantment of this fanciful piece. You are one of a kind... no one else writes like you do! I'm sure that Lyz will love this piece. You write with magical ink! My favorite lines: I turn the enchantress and cast out my spell, this dream is magic but no harm will befell Love, Cat
Seren

Seren

16 years 1 month ago

Dearest Cat

As you know Lyz calls me the enchantress of the pen .. she sent me up a statue called the enchantress and well I was looking at the figurine and then Poof this one popped into my head lol been a while since I made any magic and I needed to lighten up ... and visit the dreamtime again lol ;) thanks so much darlin for your lovely comment much appreciated and give me a big ass smile ... Hope she likes it she doesnt know about it lol she will find it eventually lol love and hugs JayCee x x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
loved

loved

16 years 1 month ago

YES you Are

You are one of your own class here I observe You control the mass. hope you will also read me and not just pass even if its a glance it will last Don’t forget me Dear poet so very fast. loved once
Seren

Seren

16 years 1 month ago

Dear lovedhow could I forget

Dear loved how could I forget you when the name itself is my favourite too ;) lol love and hugs JayCee ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
Seren

Seren

16 years 1 month ago

Dear Navvy

Thats the nicest thing to say one of my favourite quotes/lines of all time is when Galadriel hands frodo the vial of light and says "let this be a light for you when all other go out" thank you so much thats just made my day big smile love and biggest hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
Seren

Seren

16 years 1 month ago

Dear ElizabethBig smiles its

Dear Elizabeth Big smiles its not perfect quite yet lol going to make a couple of tiny changes I am very happy you liked it though,.. thanks for the comment I really appreciate the read thank you love and hugs JayCee x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
xena465

xena465

16 years 1 month ago

Beautiful...Enchanting

Yes you did create an enchanting scene here...I love it JayCee. Rosina xena465
Seren

Seren

16 years 1 month ago

Dear Rosie

Toook me a while to formulate this one in my head but once I had the bones of it worked out the rest just flowed ... so happy you liked this one I just hope Lyz likes it lol shes not seen it yet I dont think lol love and hugs JayCee x x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
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shirley harrison

16 years 1 month ago

wonderful words

wonderful poetess, you are the good witch i hope! like the one in the wizard of ozz! Much love seren..... shirley harrison
Seren

Seren

16 years 1 month ago

Dear Shirley

In this one I am the good witch enchanting dreams in the next one i am not so nice ... lol I got three more enchanted verses not quite finished yet hope you like them as well love and big hugs JayCee p.S you know one of my dreams is to travel to Italy/Florence ?... I have a love of all things italian ... sigh I wish we could swap places lol ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
SH

shirley harrison

16 years 1 month ago

well i will welcome you

Florence is one of the most enchanting places to ever see,you would love prague too. we cant swap who would do my house work! If you ever come i will take you for a beer! I miss having a drinking buddy,its much different to London. Much love shirley harison
Seren

Seren

16 years 1 month ago

Dear Shirley

I have a friend from England who visited Florence recently and sent me pictures of where they where staying lol just turned me green but it was so beautiful ... when I go I will be sure to let you know lol and housework ? I got four kids, I am going on hols to get away from housework but the drinking partner lol now your talking ;) for me its bourbon not beer though oh and cointreau lol love that stuff love and big hugs JayCee ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
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shirley harrison

16 years 1 month ago

do you like Bailys

then i will give you a little giggle have a look to see what a ciontreau and bailys is called in europe! i will give you a clue,its a coctail! ooh i've been away from london for too long! let me know if you find the answere! shirley harrison
Seren

Seren

16 years 1 month ago

Huni its called a baileys

Hun a baileys and cointreau is called a fluffy dog lol I love the stuff hahaha see I am a good old pisshead I know my cocktails :P love and big hugs JayCee P.S not sure what its called in Europe but thats what they are called here lol ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
Seren

Seren

16 years 1 month ago

I used to work in a Pub and

I used to work in a Pub and a Orgasm here had totally different ingredients lol it was Creme De Cacao,Amaretto,Triple Sec,Vodka,Light Cream gotta love cocktails lmao I do, god that made my mind warp trying to remember that lol love and biggest hugs JayCee ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
Seren

Seren

16 years 1 month ago

Dear Eph

I could tell you stories that would make your hair curl I used to be the naughtiest girl lol hahaha thanks for the comment much appreciated love and hugs JayCee x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
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lyz

16 years 1 month ago

Ah, she knows now, lol.

And to find this today, you must have known I needed a bit of special attention. How lovely of you dear Empress, The Enchantress of The Pen. Lol. I am so pleased she has finally began to work for you. I am enthralled, and no, not because it was for me, but because you have written this in pure perfection, and yes, I cried. All the pressure of late has come to a head and this beauty has made me feel that it is all worth it. Seven blue moons, ah, how delicious. Let the witching hour begin, lol. You are truly a magical creature, put here to never let us forget, magic does exist. And to bathe in all those special ingredients does sound blissful. I thank you from the bottom of my heart and may you always enchant dear Aunty Jayne, Empress Enchantress Of The pen. Thank you my dear friend. Always, Lyz. XX
Seren

Seren

16 years 1 month ago

Hello YOU lol

I wanted you to find this one when you signed in lol so I left that message I was worried about Jade and thinking how crazy worried you must have been these last few weeks, shit i know how worried ive been, anyway I was sitting here the other night after I talked to Jade and looked at my enchantress she was sitting there and said write her one about me lol so here it is ... I am so very happy if gave you a lift for thats what it was for ... just you ... I wont be posting for a bit but I will be round commenting at night when I cant sleep got a far bit on at the moment will ring you in the next few nights when I get time and fill you in ... I go to the specialist tomorrow and get my hospital date ... you take care and tell Jade to let me know if anything happens ... BIGGEST hugs darlin hope you had a great mothers day I had a lovely day,though I didnt get to see trent :( that really bummed me out but he rang tonight ... you take care huni talk in the next couple of days love Jayne-Chloe x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
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lyz

16 years ago

Dearest Aunty JayCee

I am in awe of this poem, it is enchanting and beautiful. I have my dates for hospital. In June, so I am glad I will be at the birth. Which is not too far away. I will be back to let you know exact date next Wednesday night, Jade may still go herself yet. All my love , Lyz. Thank you, you are so sweet. XX
Seren

Seren

16 years ago

Dearest Nana

I am so glad you liked it and I hope that whenever your feeling down you can come here and get a lift ... I am glad you got your dates I got my letter from the hospital today sometime in the next fourteen days I go in so I just hope its not when jade has the Baby cause we want to come down when its born of course and see our new GREAT niece lol ... love and big hugs Jayne x x x I dont feel too sweet tonight lol but I am happier seeing you (hugs) ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")