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Fathomless

Who can measure the depth of my heart
Where unfulfilled desires boil all the time?
See the sun set far away in the horizon

Innumerable  painted specks the sky there

I search for the shore of life in the darkness,
Pain-bred noises from some sea demons

Here on earth the virgin rain soaked the dry soil,
A strange fragrance shook  the mind and soul,
Not lascivious--not impure.  my hair drips
My wet eyes sobs and my glued clothes' scent,
Naked areas are decorated.  Aromaticmemories
Eloquent hopes.  Blocked words.  Deep breath.

Songs stuck in my mind's recorder. One word
One look.  Love is concise.  My sweet heart,
Don't merge with me.  Squandered spring,
Don't reappear.  Chirping birds, stop for ever.

Days of ever lasting desire is no more.
Unfulfilled desires wait at the other shore.
Echoes of feminine voice.  Fragrance of the soul,
Now fresh rain is away.  Darkness in horizon.

A brachycephal goon governs me,
Sneering at every thing useful and nice,
His mouth grills all to cow down all,
A snash dances on his weilding tongue.

That I realize is life after all!
— U K Atiyodi, May 05, 2010

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xena465

xena465

16 years 1 month ago

Beautiful

What a wonderful poem. I love it. The flow and descriptions are great UK. Rosina xena465
UA

U K Atiyodi

16 years ago

To Rosina

When you say so, it is more and more inspiring. I appreciate whatever you write. Sincerity is soaked in honey
DT

Dr.Antony Theodore

16 years ago

dear Atiyodi

how nice!! thank yu for your emotions. thank you for your thought thank you for your flow of thought. i search for the shore of life in darkness. unfilled desires and wishes. Fragrance of the soul, Now fresh rain is away. Darkness in horizon. if there is a tendency to be pessimistic please avoid it and smile at all the simple things in this world. ur friend antonytheodore. thank u God bless you.
Seren

Seren

16 years ago

Dear U.K Atiyodi

I think this is really beautiful and I also think its got a whole different feel from some of your other pieces ... beautifully done my friend big smiles love and hugs Jayne-Chloe ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")