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Kailashana
Kailashana
May 05, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

the long division of hummingbirds

free hand,
human frailty paints
a straight line
to my heart
and the madness begins

i disappear under waves of emotion,
in another world
we are drunken butterflies
sipping from an ever-blossoming well
the golden nectar of gods,

bewildered in the magnitude of wings,
we are immortality found,
words trail us like lost sheep.













 
— Kailashana, May 05, 2010

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Orphani

16 years 1 month ago

like the swell of fertile

like the swell of fertile clouds your words shall come to earth and bring their gift of rain, and that is love written in each flower of your heart. Your thirsty lover. B
Seren

Seren

16 years 1 month ago

Dear Mum

in the barren bowl of a lake as drenching rain comes your words are like the chrysalis that wait half a century to be born beautiful poem another bow glad your back darlin love you JayCee x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
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Dalton

16 years 1 month ago

As usual you leave me in the

As usual you leave me in the dust with your magical words. "Would to God that all the Lords people were Prophets." Numbers XI. ch 29 v.
xena465

xena465

16 years 1 month ago

Dear Kailashana

Superb. I love your descriptions...they paint a true picture of emotions. Rosina xena465