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Wrongfully Judged

 According to you I am a specimen Unable of adapting To awaiting challenges   Supposedly adverisity Is not my cup of tea Well I must applaud Your psycho analysis  There’s a microscopic detail That you miscalculatedSee I love challenges Especially when they blossom Like flowers in the early spring  I don’t want to bore you With accomplishmentsThat keeps mouths open As they seem dumbfounded  You can take your two centsPut it in gift wrapAnd send it to yourself  Over here things are different Dreams are highways And I seem to love The 5oclock rush hour  Listen, assume at willJudge blindly Just make sure You don’t Judge me 
— paul, May 04, 2010

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Region, Country: New York, USA

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Mark

Mark

16 years 1 month ago

Statement

duly noted.. may it be - five O'clock ?? I like the rush hour idea, Paul.. Mark Resilient Flexibility RUN; when there seems to be no answer common sense will not speak, so run - -go running..
DawningDaytripper

DawningDaytripper

16 years 1 month ago

Oh step back, someone done

Oh step back, someone done ticked Paul off! Not a good idea. I loved your rush hr referance two. There does seem to be two distinct parts to this poem, when you are talking of the person to make assumption, then when you assume the poem for yourself. I loved the second part. Although the first set me up for it. Thanks for sharing, and you definatly had a change of pace here! Julie D.D.