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May 04, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

When That Happens

When That happens

What Happenswhen jacks' up,the whole day longin the waitingAt the pub or club?what happensif you are outin the park awaitingit to get dark then
what will happenif its standingis of no use you will be calleda silly goose andshe,
an ass

— loved, May 04, 2010

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Country/Region: ROU

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xena465

16 years 1 month ago

Comical

Very funny and witty Loved...nice one. Rosina xena465

16 years 1 month ago

thanks

u r kind friend at least u encourage me love the fun music has just begun this life has many ways to befriend

Z

16 years 1 month ago

hi

a silly goose , a light hearted read ,zigs

16 years 1 month ago

glad

...u smiled thanks

16 years 1 month ago

nice rythem

this has a nice little rythem to it, nice work

16 years 1 month ago

thanks

... thank u very much for ur encouragement and appreciation loved