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TWO STANDING STONE POEMS

                 Mysterious Menhirs

 

Oh stones that stand 

when bones of man have come and gone,

what tales you house in your big dark forms,

that as we touch your solemn stuff of centuries past,

we feel an awe, your presence to enhance;

for like all grand illusions 'tis us who hold the pen;

as we too come and go again,

our fate, the actions, arts of men to wield,

there standing in that field forlorn,

like a ring of people, silent, meditating sages, 

your parliament to hold through all the ages,

a symbol, man or menhir, as megalithic dreams,

their worship measured, guided by the sun, the moon, the stars,

the ever present search for meaning in our lives,

these noble relics, now personified,

that stand and gaze for ever like the constancy of tides,

what mysteries you hide, we do not know,

and will we ever. No.

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              Alone with Ancient Stones

 

To meditate with megaliths alone, so wide the sky above,

so desolate a place, and yet when still we hear, 

we see the universe,

we know some sense of whole perceived a form,

becomes a form we can believe.

 

Out there the seas expanse goes on its daily dance,

in winds and drawn by time,

its tides and our great white goddess moon,

to touch these cold grey standing stones,

and feel the ages past, in the silence of one's solitude,

 

their firm shapes, their glints of silica reflecting sun,

their textures rough and smooth,

life's path well weathered worn,

is to be born anew with yet another view, one so magnificent,

omnipotent and grand, with which we now relate.

 

They do not dance, some fall about, they're still,

some prostrate in the grass, those quiet mysterious lumps of stone,

now placed in a great ring, the shape of planet earth,

the moon, the sun, the circle in its symbol of a whole,

revolving and revolving with the seasons as they come,

 

they seem to dance a slow majestic waltz each day,

at night reflecting stars, giant shadows of the night,

alive again they tell us of their fate, 

as passing plants and animals, and finally of man;

their feet deep in the sand.



 

 





 

 

 
— Nordic cloud, May 04, 2010

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Region, Country: Oslo and Flatdal, Norway., NOR

Favorite Poets: Too daunting this.

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raskin

16 years 1 month ago

Great, Ann. To feel time in

Great, Ann. To feel time in your hand, the warmth from the sun. All the ages they have seen, quietly witnessing. Sparks my imagination. raskin
Professor Purple

Professor Purple

16 years 1 month ago

Very nice! This inspires me

Very nice! This inspires me for a huge fantasy project I'm working on. And also it encourages me to feel free to write poems that don't rhyme, for some reason I find that very hard to do. Long live free-form poetry! Prof. P.
DawningDaytripper

DawningDaytripper

16 years 1 month ago

I loved that feeling of

I loved that feeling of ancient and sacred that you conveyed with these write Ann, so magical. You transported me with you and created another realty for me. Great job, with both. Julie D.D.
Seren

Seren

16 years 1 month ago

Dear Ann

I looked at the title of this one last night and read two on the beginning of the poem and thought it was your two poems of may 1st lmao god I must have been half out of my mind lol so sorry about that hun ... brilliantly written and like Julie I was transported to another place ;) love and biggest hugs JayCee x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 1 month ago

Dear mysterious Professor Purple

Ann of Norway "Very nice! This inspires me for a huge fantasy project I’m working on. And also it encourages me to feel free to write poems that don’t rhyme, for some reason I find that very hard to do. Long live free-form poetry! Prof. P." This sounds exciting, a project on fantasy, pray where? At University or college, at home, at school? What a wonderfully rich title to inspire one to fantasise on, it will be fun if you find time and could, that you gave us an inkling of this project to see wouldn't it folks? Very exciting and thank you for your comment. Yours Ann.
Professor Purple

Professor Purple

16 years 1 month ago

At home, a very big project,

At home, a very big project, with main sources of inspiration being Tolkien and Weis & Hickman's Dragonlance. Very big, and only recently started, a few months ago. I'll post a few chapters or parts of chapters, but please be patient, I don't have internet access at home. When I do post, should I do so in the "short stories" section, even if it's really parts of a long one? Prof. P.