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May 04, 2010
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Go...Get Some Lollipops!!
Treat your self to a lollipop
wake up the kid in you with joy
lick it, roll it, feel it melt
reminisce the good taste it left
sweet, isn't it, even now?..
Do you remember
their soft centres and dry fruits
caramel that tasted so good
it may not have lasted too long
like good things, in life..
It costs very little, to light up a life
worth a million, is a smile
for sweet things to happen your way
you got to give, yourself a break
So, Go, get some lollipops
before the shop closes down...
raj (sublime_ocean)
— raj, May 04, 2010
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Critiques
xena465
16 years 1 month ago
A long time...
raj
16 years 1 month ago
Thank You
shirley harrison
16 years 1 month ago
sublime and sweet!
raj
16 years 1 month ago
Ah! so sweet of you
magics02
16 years 1 month ago
I used to like the
raj
16 years 1 month ago
have lots n lots
magics02
16 years 1 month ago
Got that one right!!!!
raj
16 years 1 month ago
Oh really?