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WHY

 Why did she
this girl I loved
take it all away from me

these stars that led
and were my guide
 sun from my past gone days

with their blues and grey
each one of these
she sent me on my way

I often wonder why it was
and how it came about
and some-times with angry cries

to the world this word I shout....


— mantiscepter, May 04, 2010

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Seren

16 years 1 month ago

Dear John

Lament of the lost ... how beautifully written my friend ... sigh it fits my mood today thanks so much for sharing this one ... you have inspired me love and hugs JayCee x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
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mantiscepter

16 years 1 month ago

Why me....

Kinda funny in a way, but glad it put you in a mood Mrs. and I hope the rest of your evening is beautiful, warm and, and simply lovely.. Love John. and again thank you for stopping by to read these poems, and for your comments and instruction, on occasion. Love ya. Big hugs.