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loved
May 03, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Beyond The Domains

       Beyond The Domains

 

Beyond The Domains

 of my earthly remains

lurk shadows in the dark

searching of me

what remains in the labyrinth

dark and deep,

where my soul does

silently weep 

upon my domains

do shower rains

of roses and petals

as my poetry  does  find

in many hearts

A peaceful retreat…

— loved, May 03, 2010

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xena465

xena465

16 years 1 month ago

Superb Loved

A beautiful well written write...I love it. Rosina xena465
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barbsdad2003

16 years 1 month ago

If I may make the ...

wee-est suggestion as to a particular verb: as to upon my domains does shower rains of roses and petals if I'm reading these upon-petals lines correctly, I think does oughta be do; don't you? or maybe not; thanx so much, thanx a lot By domains, do you refer to Internet domains? I'm not clear, though perhaps I ought to be. Yours, Chuck
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shirley harrison

16 years 1 month ago

Peace my friend

lovely loved in every way! shirley harrison
loved

loved

16 years 1 month ago

thanks for it

the domains are all that remains after we all balance out our gains thanks stay happy the domain is free anyone can roam and enter in