Thrilled savagely

in the arts of this state .. great job man ! Mark Resilient Flexibility RUN; when there seems to be no answer common sense will not speak, so run - -go running..

I do so understand the quest for the right words to express one self. My favorite lines: Come hither! I coax you into my danger zone ground point one is me can you see? excellent and passionate. Always, Cat

This actually made me wet! Stragely arousing , oh hairy one...mmmmmmm Ells x

A worthwhile theme and a brilliant write! There is so much to applaud about this poem I scarce know where to start, so I'll just pay homage to the great intellect that created it!

And you said that going outback did not inspire you Jess! Good read, honest. Surrendering to the animal is not always the answer. But it does feel good. Julie D.D.

Iv just been thrilled savagely! great poem shirley harrison

Jess. Lost when Atlas shrugged in the art of self-denial i am an impaired vision of molecular division.... Lord, you make me so hot, burning away for nothing. ~A "The plain man is familiar with blindness and deafness, and knows from his everyday experience that the look of things is influenced by his senses, but it never occurs to him to regard the whole world as a creation of his senses." ~ Ernst Mach

You coaxed and pulled and seduced this write to you didnt you ... the passions palpable and the writes brilliant bow love JayCee x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")

this is remarkable. be with me be me lose you. (the period was great. made this a wonderful statement) and i loose me then we see what we is i truly love this jess.

I swore, I will never be seduced by a man. And I wasn't, I was seduced by his poetry. In a completely non-gay way, brilliant. So what is we?

...the effort is apparent, and it's quite elloquent in it's description of the way two souls morph into what becomes "one". "Write on"! sincerely, #{:-{)}8==== docmaverick.

The best one of yours I have read. The simpleness of the complexe nature is brilliant. the subtle undertone is screaming to be heard. I love every word, the structure and the thoughts provoked. Well done my friend. Live, Laugh and Love (and don't forget to write) Tink

Really enjoyed this. The melding of individuals to see what becomes of the sum of the parts once they forget themselves in intensity. The ego of being at the center in the start of it, challenging, coaxing, cajoling, then transforming into one single intimacy larger than the mere sum of its components, filled with possibility. The pleasure of that joining, without thought or worry of consequence. This is what I love, simple words that evoke such passion and response in me. Most excellent. Respectfully Jim "Laws and rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" : Race

Neanderthal! Prowling on words taken by surprise might be written Prowling for words taken by surprise or Preying on words taken by surprise I don't expect either of these alternatives to meet with your favor. No matter: Great job here. Chuck

Knock you on your back? ....lol....looks like you are knocking some,including me...on ours~! I love the way you have used the words to paint the vision of predator and prey. Has a sly nature in its tone. Excellent write~! ;)

begging them to return to me love judy xxx