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EPITAPH

EPITAPH

If my life were measured out

Like hours in one long day,

As I write this, the sun is low;

The shadows lengthen, time to go,

I’ve had a pleasant stay.
 

In this sweet garden of my mind

The setting sun gives light

I sip my wine, see birds catch flies

To feed their young - still hungry cries-

I’ve done that, won that fight.
 

I’ve made and lost a lot of friends

But to those here I say

You are the best I've ever had,

Each one I treasure and I’m glad

You've come, for me, today
 

And so -- farewell -- it’s time to go

By now I’ll know just where,

So draw the curtains, no more tears,

Enjoy each hour of your next years,

I’m somewhere, but not here

— Tam the Chanter, May 03, 2010

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Roscoe Lane

Roscoe Lane

16 years 1 month ago

Some write Tam,

i would be proud to have it as mine, just a wee joke. Great poem, Regards Roscoe..
Tam the Chanter

Tam the Chanter

16 years 1 month ago

Roscoe

Thanks , mate , I've had this in the back of a notebook for ages, just for a laugh Ian
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poewriter58

16 years 1 month ago

Tam

I don't know how I did it but I read your second line as like the hours of one long day perhaps I was doing a mental edit but those ones here I say might be just me again but I tripped a bit on these words , a little rough when spoken( as I read the poem out loud) such a calmly written poem almost soothing. well done and my belated congratulations on winning the poetry contest Chrys
Tam the Chanter

Tam the Chanter

16 years 1 month ago

Epitaph

Thanks for the crit., Chrys, you were right and I've changed that line. Ian