Slanted Coast

...And you use it well here. Do you want moonlight to be two words? I read it differently the second time, as moonlight. This is a great image of the sun setting. I can hear the sunset as it sinks into the ocean. I miss the sunsets. I could always imagine the sun hissing as it hit the horizon. But now I will imagine it singing instead. Yes, much better. Nice poem. Thanks, Lisa