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What Roving Eyes Do


What Roving Eyes Do


I constantly love

with a diction in my mind

‘’its better to have a bird in hand than two million in a bush’’

And see sill your eyes keep roving.

how else could I write two poems

on behalf of the lad,

I just posted?

 

cheating is final sex

intercourse  means final,

With the other guy/gal…

 

seeing is simply enjoying nature’s

Natural beauty.

The spouse alone will return the kiss won’t that be the case…

 

roving eyes are welcome too,

it  increases one’s value

where are you,

where are you

Where are you?

let my  roving eyes see you,

As you too do.

 

 

 

 

— loved, May 02, 2010

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xena465

xena465

16 years 1 month ago

I hate that Loved, that

I hate that Loved, that feeling when someone's striping you naked with their eyes. Nice one. Rosina xena465
loved

loved

16 years 1 month ago

ONE JUST CAN'T

ONE just can't like the whole of me at times hatred too is equally pleasing... loved
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 1 month ago

Dear Loved

I agree with Rosina. Great poem. the lines that struck me: cheating is final sex intercourse means final, With the other guy/gal… Always, Cat
loved

loved

16 years 1 month ago

thankk you

this was a comment on someones writing questioning the very genesis of CHEATING LOVED