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May 02, 2010
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Exploration ( Rated R for Content)
I want to explore you, probe the peaks and ravines
bodies aching, vibrating to be as one. dripping with sweetness
tips of fingers indent flesh, tongues dip and collide
sample smooth skin, salty, fresh
enfold my limbs, to avoid escape
warm breath against back of my neck
we two moulded in perfect unity
I need our lips to brush , nip and suckle, hands cup and caress
electricity, sparks fly and spring up, eyes blaze
let the essence of you burrow deep inside
undulation as pure energy connects
gasping breathless clinging entwined
pure release heaven aligned
— lou, May 02, 2010
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Critiques
Kailashana
16 years 1 month ago
Hmmmm.Copulation theories
lou
16 years 1 month ago
Too Rude ?
Kailashana
16 years 1 month ago
Rude? You haven’t read
lou
16 years 1 month ago
rude
hobo
16 years 1 month ago
Girl you are killing me
lou
16 years 1 month ago
Haha
Geezer
16 years 1 month ago
I would have...
lou
16 years 1 month ago
Thanks
Dalton
16 years ago
i liked the last two lines
lou
16 years ago
Thanks