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Potter's Theorem:

Am i human
or simply characters in a text
if so which book am i
the bible or the lexicon
do the eyes that scan me complete me
am i contingent of a loving god
or does he play with me for his joy
if you read on will i die
do the lives of others depend on
how i'm phrased
will words transform into bullets
will prophets shake the earth
and transport the minds of men
throughout the ages
do i have a meaning
does the gamut of my knowledge
hide some internal structure
will i bring about peace
or the end of civilization
if so should i care?
— Dalton, May 01, 2010

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Country/Region: The Celestial River

Favorite Poets: Shane MacGowan, Dylan Thomas, Qays ibn Al-Mulawwah, Wallada bint al-Mustakfi, Rumi, Khalil Gibran, Yona Wallach, Arthur Rimbaud, Paul Eluard, Brendan Behan, James Clarence Mangan, William Blake, Tom Waits, Charles Bukowski, Forough Farrokhzad, Thomas Chatterton

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infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

16 years 1 month ago

Deep, bro

I noticed a correlation between uncapitalized letters, no punctuation, and the end "should I care?" Was this intentional? 'Cause it's bloody brilliant, friend. If I used the star system, you'd get 5. ~Jess K. ----------------------- "Life is the sun, and the show must go on and on; make it come true. Life is the sun, and the road goes on and on; paint this song any colour but blue." - Don Ross
Seren

Seren

16 years 1 month ago

Dear Dalton

I agree with Jess this ones brilliant ... you never disappoint and todays no different love and hugs JayCee x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")