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May 01, 2010
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woman of the spring shadow
shadow woman of the disrobed spirits
mornings vast difference of subtle moments
between earth and sky's disheveled gathering
of spring
i have found you in the meadows blindness
where one final bird calls your body's art
to my lost fingers
and there the dawning fragrance
has kissed all flowers
and i have dared remember
as once with eyes we touched them
and held the leaves open between us
that spring could live and find us within
mornings vast difference of subtle moments
between earth and sky's disheveled gathering
of spring
i have found you in the meadows blindness
where one final bird calls your body's art
to my lost fingers
and there the dawning fragrance
has kissed all flowers
and i have dared remember
as once with eyes we touched them
and held the leaves open between us
that spring could live and find us within
— Orphani, May 01, 2010
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Nordic cloud
16 years 1 month ago
On the wings of springs undressed visions
Orphani
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