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Susie's Poem

 Whistling through days
melting are clouds
faces so endless 
filling air 
thoughts are loud

rhythmic these sounds
our minds changing tunes
narrowing  a darkness
cast are voices that loom

far from these edges
signs are not cleared
of constant vibrations
we first think of fear

laughter that leaves us
peering in jest
scoffing lithe echos 
we did not request

hovering as birds
that hummingly buzz
tuning ears with a tone
of minds molting love


now scattered with breeze........


— mantiscepter, Apr 30, 2010

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lyz

16 years 1 month ago

Dear John

So sad this poem seems. A tribute to Susie. She would be honored as I am to have read. Thank you for sharing. I hope all is fine. Love Lyz. XX
Seren

Seren

16 years 1 month ago

Dear John

Very wistful write this one ... lovely tribute my friend (hugs) love JayCee x x x P.S I am a little behind with writes so will catch up over the next couple of days on the ones I missed out on ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")