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Apr 30, 2010
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Susie's Poem
Whistling through days
melting are clouds
faces so endless
filling air
thoughts are loud
rhythmic these sounds
our minds changing tunes
narrowing a darkness
cast are voices that loom
far from these edges
signs are not cleared
of constant vibrations
we first think of fear
laughter that leaves us
peering in jest
scoffing lithe echos
we did not request
hovering as birds
that hummingly buzz
tuning ears with a tone
of minds molting love
now scattered with breeze........
melting are clouds
faces so endless
filling air
thoughts are loud
rhythmic these sounds
our minds changing tunes
narrowing a darkness
cast are voices that loom
far from these edges
signs are not cleared
of constant vibrations
we first think of fear
laughter that leaves us
peering in jest
scoffing lithe echos
we did not request
hovering as birds
that hummingly buzz
tuning ears with a tone
of minds molting love
now scattered with breeze........
— mantiscepter, Apr 30, 2010
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