Join the Neopoet online poetry workshop and community to improve as a writer, meet fellow poets, and showcase your work. Sign up, submit your poetry, and get started.
NO EXPECTATIONS
NO EXPECTATIONS
No expectations dog your step
no freedom lost, no load
no heavy chains to bind you
no God to confound you
no thing that penetrates
your self, you own true self
you're not upon the shelf for sale
nor languishing in luxuries pail of muck
but have the best of luck
to find a tiny seed
a seed that meets your need
of company
of harmony
of peace.
I wish to be that tiny seed
that never grows to be
a flower or fruit
beside the others in yourself
those grand fine lovers on your shelf
of ecstasies and loves
I wait for no-one's nurturing
no flame to light the fire
just let me lie like fallen fruits
until at last I expire.
But there inside you when you need
lies the stone that slew Goliath
waiting to defend your honour
defend your whole
so cast it on your troubles
when they torture you to death
I'll be there as a minute fleck
of insignificant dust
that chokes the furies in their flight
and digs them down in earth
so remember when you're needing me
I'l be there for your second birth.
Critiques
xena465
16 years 1 month ago
Lovely Ann
Nordic cloud
16 years 1 month ago
You are so sweet and gentle yourself Rosina
lyz
16 years 1 month ago
Dear Ann
Nordic cloud
16 years 1 month ago
The giving of love is the greatest love one shows
loved
16 years 1 month ago
CAN WE EVER
Nordic cloud
16 years 1 month ago
Nice of you to say so loved
Ross Hamilton Hill
16 years 1 month ago
liked
Nordic cloud
16 years 1 month ago
You are right Ross
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
Dear Ann
Nordic cloud
16 years 1 month ago
To render someone speechless
themoonman
16 years 1 month ago
Ann of Norway...
Nordic cloud
16 years 1 month ago
one dedicates oneself, not out of duty, but out of love.
raskin
16 years 1 month ago
Well expressed, I am fond of
Nordic cloud
16 years 1 month ago
Maybe we cannot avoid those too raskin
Kailashana
16 years 1 month ago
Every poem could and should
lyz
16 years 1 month ago
Dear Ann