Night & Day

hi some good lines to this last stanza my fav cheers ,,,,,zigs

Beautiful poem Rosi, wonderful and delightful! shirley harrison

Ann of Norway Wow I never saw such beautiful poetry so unaffected and direct, so seen, so felt, so perceived as it is, yes nature is there and you have taken the atmosphere and transformed it into a most lovely picture, one we can see again and again as the day becomes night and the night becomes day. I loved the beginning with you being dazzled by the light of a star and then suddenly the sun burst out and dazzled you in turn; the imagery, the immediacy of it, in the now so that we feel we could reach out and grab the branch even the star. The lovely touch with the sound of a child calling her dogs name; the near the far, with the sheep on the hills, all through you give it such depth, I am stunned and made by this to feel so happy that it is you who wrote this dear sweet Rosina, you can, you have, and we wish to see more of this you made it work so beautifully, wonderful poem.  I love it and love you too Ann

a beautiful picture Zena. Take Care

uplifting indeed. Soft and beautiful. Rosina, you have painted a beautiful picture with your lovely words. Nice tribute to our dear Annie. Love Lyz. XX

will be replaced by ur moon what a delighful read ''The moon now shines in the azure sky'' add on for ever on your spot light LOVED BY ONE AND ALL

I too love the imagery in this write, so nice and sweetening and of course you can write about anything. This one is special as it is for Annie and she so deserving of it also, as yourself special. Kudos to you Love, Mona xoxoxox TIME well spent is TIME well lived

you've reminded us all of the simple beauties of the world. It touched me deeply. The metre still falters a little here and there but its got a lovely directness. 'asleep on a leaf is the butterfly' my favourite line, love it. best wishes ross

Beautiful write its all been said before me .. love and hugs JayCee ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")

nicely made. shan

This is beautiful my friend, it has such a easy flow to it and it is the discription of a beautiful day where everything is right. very, very nice

If I may: I think the two lines below will gain by the deletion of (my bracketed) the. I shade my eyes from light of [the] sun a brand new day has just begun I love the rhyme of splendour with remember. And very nice mix, this following stanza: Botanical Gardens filled with splendour so beautiful, a sight to remember See the castle, standing tall with climbing ivy growing on the wall. As per usual, I'm appreciating you, Chuck

another cracker, from a wee cracker. Seriously Rosi, it was beautiful. Love Roscoe..

Painted perfectly for me, awsome