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LOVE

LOVE
THE over exagarated word often used in noncommitable situations,
what creats true love ,
what builds that successful foundation of love betwen those who claim to have found it ,
what constitutes the brutality of betrayal between two souls who think that  to become one with another soul,
it has to be result of love ,
if love is so glamourous then why are constantly hurting  through it?. 
— Thulisile, Apr 30, 2010

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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 1 month ago

Hello

Nice to meet you. Your poem brings up many questions and so merits more question marks. I see you have a typo on the word creates. Not to worry, these are easy problems to fix. I liked your poem. Always, Cat
hobo

hobo

16 years 1 month ago

very true

isn't it true that people seem to hurt the ones they love
SH

shirley harrison

16 years 1 month ago

lovely

Very beautiful this poem, i am sorry about the photo! i believe that the real tool you need for love is that "you love your self" shirley harrison