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Apr 30, 2010
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LOVE
LOVE
THE over exagarated word often used in noncommitable situations,
what creats true love ,
what builds that successful foundation of love betwen those who claim to have found it ,
what constitutes the brutality of betrayal between two souls who think that to become one with another soul,
it has to be result of love ,
if love is so glamourous then why are constantly hurting through it?.
THE over exagarated word often used in noncommitable situations,
what creats true love ,
what builds that successful foundation of love betwen those who claim to have found it ,
what constitutes the brutality of betrayal between two souls who think that to become one with another soul,
it has to be result of love ,
if love is so glamourous then why are constantly hurting through it?.
— Thulisile, Apr 30, 2010
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Candlewitch
16 years 1 month ago
Hello
hobo
16 years 1 month ago
very true
Thulisile
16 years 1 month ago
HOW DO WE PREVENT THAT FROM
shirley harrison
16 years 1 month ago
lovely
Thulisile
16 years 1 month ago
STILL PRACTICING THAT.