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The Embrace

     The Embrace



You rest your head upon my chest

and

I circle my arms around

and

such a soft place of comfort

You’ve found…

 

as you rest your head on me

your hair flows about

and

smacks my eyes

and

Then does you surprise…

 

you comfort my face

with a smile

as I look so warm

you know its time

so there’s  no harm

let the soft music

play on

play on

play on

and

then we revive

our mutual self

For life long…

— loved, Apr 29, 2010

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Country/Region: ROU

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lyz

16 years 1 month ago

Beautiful

We all need an embrace at times, and you have put it well with warmth in your words. Our mutual self for life long. Beautiful. Lyz. XX
loved

loved

16 years 1 month ago

THANKS

UR Really REMARKABLE Thanks Loved
loved

loved

16 years 1 month ago

thanks again

I am a simple poet of few simple words as a kid I had heard you all are poets of magnitude I can that conclude. But you all are so generous here it’s so nice You all me too endear. thanks go to each one of you where are you where are you where are you loved
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ziggy

16 years 1 month ago

hi

hi this reads ok i like some of the lines good theme , chat soon all the best ,zigs
loved

loved

16 years 1 month ago

thanks

pl do read my ROSES NEVER FADE ANYWAY LOVED
SH

shirley harrison

16 years 1 month ago

I am a woman!

Really Romantic poem i love it! with warm embrace from shirley harrison
loved

loved

16 years 1 month ago

THANKS

Thanks a lot u devote ur attention for which I am grateful LOVED