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Apr 29, 2010
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The Embrace
The Embrace
You rest your head upon my chest
and
I circle my arms around
and
such a soft place of comfort
You’ve found…
as you rest your head on me
your hair flows about
and
smacks my eyes
and
Then does you surprise…
you comfort my face
with a smile
as I look so warm
you know its time
so there’s no harm
let the soft music
play on
play on
play on
and
then we revive
our mutual self
For life long…
— loved, Apr 29, 2010
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lyz
16 years 2 months ago
Beautiful
loved
16 years 2 months ago
THANKS
loved
16 years 2 months ago
thanks again
ziggy
16 years 2 months ago
hi
loved
16 years 2 months ago
thanks
shirley harrison
16 years 2 months ago
I am a woman!
loved
16 years 2 months ago
THANKS
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