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consider the source ~ two tales of ambiguity

1.

A woman walks into a grocery store with three small children
in tow, all three are having a bad day,
crying or throwing temper tantrums,
she screams at them,
her hand lifts to hit...
you are a witness, what do you do?

however, now you know that she found out earlier in
the day her mother is dying of cancer and her husband
is having an affair...

perhaps her children sense it...

....consider the source.

2.


the phone rings in the execution chamber... the governor
is calling... three possible scenarios play out...

it's a last-minute reprieve... he has been a model inmate,
earned a degree and now speaks to youngsters at risk,
in another scene,
the law plays out...an eye for an eye...full restitution,
the poison is injected and after a few
convulsions, he's declared dead
yet in another reality, he's granted a reprieve, taken off death
row, moved into another prison, escapes, and kills two more
innocent bystanders.

....consider the source.


How do we know we are doing the right thing? We don't.

Consider the source. And so it goes.




— Kailashana, Apr 29, 2010

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Roscoe Lane

Roscoe Lane

16 years 1 month ago

We can only do,

what we think is best for the whole of society, and if that means the death penalty being executed then so be it. At least you have a consensus, the same has to be applied with the lady and the children. She would get a fair hearing, and obviously if it was found she had bad news, then that would always be taken into consideration. That's all anybody can ask for. Regards Roscoe...
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 1 month ago

The point is, it’s never

The point is, it's never as *cut and dry*, *black and white* as one would be led to believe. It takes a whole lot of compassion to know that. ~A "The plain man is familiar with blindness and deafness, and knows from his everyday experience that the look of things is influenced by his senses, but it never occurs to him to regard the whole world as a creation of his senses." ~ Ernst Mach
weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years 1 month ago

mmmm, different for you,

you been deep in thought my dear? Something grounding you at the moment? I love the elegant straightforwardness of this write. Haven't been visiting much lately but intend to amend that much love, Jess, Reprehensibly irrepressible, "Faith is not a short-cut to knowledge, it is a short-circuit in the brain" Ayn Rand.
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 1 month ago

It’s different at least

It's different at least here, in this poetry site. Sometimes stuff like this is a whole lot better at answering questions than asking them, considering the source.... The universe is always on the path of the least resistance, no matter how we resist, eh? Love to Jess, ~A "The plain man is familiar with blindness and deafness, and knows from his everyday experience that the look of things is influenced by his senses, but it never occurs to him to regard the whole world as a creation of his senses." ~ Ernst Mach