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A Certain Smile.

It was on my regular walk, when I first saw her
with her beautiful red hair flowing in the breeze.
A lovely young girl, in her teens
always happy to smile at me
and to say hello.
She was a little younger then.

Now when I see her, she has the look of a women
and a young man holds her hand.
I saw them both walking towards me the other day
coming from the woods nearby.
His face a little flushed and her hair still lovely,
but rather ruffled.

They both seemed a little self concious
when they passed by me
and as she said hello,
she seemed to look different
as she gave me a certain smile,
something I'd not seen for a long time.

Then I realised what I had seen,
he was her first love,
we all know the signs.
I think she may have shared
her passion with him
for the very first time.

I haven't seen them for quite a while.
They probably have other ways
of spending time together now,
than walks through the woods.
But I think I will always remember her,
with her lovely red hair and that certain smile.
 

— Timbo, Apr 29, 2010

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Country/Region: GBR

Favorite Poets: Rather than poets I tend to be influenced by songwriters and have a love of lyrics.

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magics02

16 years 1 month ago

Timbo

Why is this love story poem on the back burner and I really want to say I thought this a nice write of yours as you tell this story. Just me stopping in to say I read your poem today. And liked it Magics02 TIME well spent is TIME well lived
Tim

Tim

16 years 1 month ago

Hiya, Nice to hear from you

Hiya, Nice to hear from you again. Not had much reaction to this one which is a change in style for me, I usually prefer rhyme. I only wrote it recently and was a bit curious to see how it came across. So it's very rewarding to see your comment. thank you! take care, Tim
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magics02

16 years 1 month ago

You keep on the writing Timbo

And yes I been wondering where you have been and missed your writes, Get back in that driver seat and write your stuff!! LOL and have a great day today Magics02 TIME well spent is TIME well lived
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hippiepoet69

16 years 1 month ago

I Love It

enough said. I'm adding you as a friend and read some more. Take Care. huey
Tim

Tim

16 years 1 month ago

Thanks again mate and for

Thanks again mate and for the encouragement. This one was a bit of an experiment as it's not my usual writing rhyming style which I usually prefer. cheer, Tim