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erotic confessions

                       1.

i have traced the curves of your moist language
word by word
their capacities exquisite within the walls of truth
we are fucking, bucking insanities defined
in the shower of seeds beneath the flower of night
i am drunk in the religion of your breath
in the spiral temple of your breasts
my fingers have prayed
my tongue has sunk hallowed
in the monastery of your mouth
our Pilgrim spirits have danced
in the creation of  their words

                     2

i know you on the inside
your sanctuary
i have walked your hardwood floors
and spooned into your semblance
i have grown into a steeple of reasons
preliminaries of wriggling probabilities
in the contours of your context
the square peg not always fitting in the round whole
the blues of a succulent parting
floppy afterglows of music softly oozing
saxophone rhythms
Billy Holiday in the mist
sending the fat cat under the bed
as we tumble from loves mistakes
— Orphani, Apr 29, 2010

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Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 1 month ago

Mmmmmmmm.So THAT’S how you

Mmmmmmmm. So THAT'S how you see it, eh? Love, your temple of doom. And think not that we are not doomed to spend eternity in our poems. Smile. ~A "The plain man is familiar with blindness and deafness, and knows from his everyday experience that the look of things is influenced by his senses, but it never occurs to him to regard the whole world as a creation of his senses." ~ Ernst Mach
Seren

Seren

16 years 1 month ago

Dear B

To show you my favourite lines I would have to copy the whole poem ... brilliantly done ... your poetry reaches for new heights love and hugs JayCee x x x ("Quote:- Death is the great adventure beside which moon landings and space trips pale into insignificance. Addison Joseph")
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lyz

16 years 1 month ago

And free of charge.

I feel voyeuristic, witnessing your confession, lol. An expression of deep love and devotion but truly erotic. I really needed to see your arse today mister, I will have to hose you two down soon, lol. You are a lucky woman Anna. You go O. Love Lyz. XX
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Orphani

16 years 1 month ago

To the irrepressible

To the irrepressible fighting koala. GET WRITING! PEOPLE ARE WAITING! Don't make us have to scrape up air fare to come kick your all to preocupied ass out of that tree. B
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lyz

16 years 1 month ago

Blah Blah

You just continue giving us these hot beauties Mister. And I think this koala has already fallen, lol. Loved the reread and it is still a sizzlin', except for the cat under the bed, lol. Cruel. XX