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Apr 28, 2010
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so you loved me
ON OUR FIRST NIGHT YOU SAID LOVED ME
HAPPY WAS I TO HAVE SUCH AN EFFECT ON ANOTHER BEING,
I SHOULD HAVE ASKED YOU WHAT YOU MEAN'T ,BUT
WAS TO OBSORBED ONTO THOSE WORDS,
MY BAD FOR THE MISUNDERSTANDING ON MY PART
I WOULD HAVE ASKED MY HEART TO STOP BEATING WHENEVER I SENSED YOUR PRESENCE
I DOUBT MY DREAMS WOULD EVER HAVE FEATURED YOUR FACE AND I'M SORRY FOR THINKING THAT YOU AND I COULD EVER HAVE CREATED ONE WORLD FILLLED WITH LOVE ,
IF YOU ONLY TOLD ME THE TRUTH ................... THAT NEVER YOU LOVED ME BUT WAS LUSTFUL
HAPPY WAS I TO HAVE SUCH AN EFFECT ON ANOTHER BEING,
I SHOULD HAVE ASKED YOU WHAT YOU MEAN'T ,BUT
WAS TO OBSORBED ONTO THOSE WORDS,
MY BAD FOR THE MISUNDERSTANDING ON MY PART
I WOULD HAVE ASKED MY HEART TO STOP BEATING WHENEVER I SENSED YOUR PRESENCE
I DOUBT MY DREAMS WOULD EVER HAVE FEATURED YOUR FACE AND I'M SORRY FOR THINKING THAT YOU AND I COULD EVER HAVE CREATED ONE WORLD FILLLED WITH LOVE ,
IF YOU ONLY TOLD ME THE TRUTH ................... THAT NEVER YOU LOVED ME BUT WAS LUSTFUL
— Thulisile, Apr 28, 2010
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Thulisile
16 years 1 month ago
be brutal