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so you loved me

ON OUR FIRST NIGHT YOU SAID LOVED ME
HAPPY WAS I TO HAVE SUCH AN EFFECT ON  ANOTHER BEING,
I SHOULD  HAVE ASKED YOU  WHAT YOU MEAN'T ,BUT
WAS TO OBSORBED ONTO THOSE WORDS,
MY BAD FOR THE MISUNDERSTANDING ON MY  PART
I WOULD HAVE ASKED MY HEART TO STOP BEATING WHENEVER I SENSED YOUR PRESENCE
I DOUBT MY DREAMS WOULD EVER HAVE FEATURED YOUR FACE AND I'M SORRY FOR THINKING THAT YOU  AND I COULD EVER HAVE CREATED ONE WORLD  FILLLED WITH LOVE ,
IF YOU ONLY TOLD ME  THE TRUTH ................... THAT NEVER YOU  LOVED ME  BUT WAS LUSTFUL
— Thulisile, Apr 28, 2010

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