Miracle Incarnate

I would use the last line: miracle incarnate, my Electra has title... leave it off the last line. "by your grace I am exonerated." is strong and beautiful enough to stand on its own as an ending. Also some changes... to use or not... Miracle incarnate, my Electra (or visa versa) Velvet flux of sychronized harmony waltzing to music's heartbeat infused your inspiration reciprocal fluid elocution; we drift and glide on laughter dancing attendance on physical syntax our traumas to slumber caught in gossamer web of our universe until touched by your migrant spirit I neither lived nor breathed… existence within narrow boundaries unimaginable loneliness defined me you crossed my impenetrable barriers transformed this apathy of being rescued me from bitter soul-death in my stunted reality of quiescent cynicism a spiritless and comatose creature like a kiss of redemption to a condemned man bewitched am I, gladly compliant by your grace I am exonerated. This is a poem of rare beauty. Well done Cat! "The plain man is familiar with blindness and deafness, and knows from his everyday experience that the look of things is influenced by his senses, but it never occurs to him to regard the whole world as a creation of his senses." ~ Ernst Mach

Breathtakingly beautiful poetry! You have touched nerves and plucked heartstrings with this one! Bravo dear Lady!

I dont know, I like the title, sensual, but I also Like Anna's suggestion. I actually cannot pick a favorite line, it is a wonderful write. Sad, sensual and alive. That is what I got from this. You are a beautiful poet. Love Lyz. XX

This is a song of a spirits reawakening ... beautifully done dear one bit under the weather will come back in the morning and try and think up a title suggestion or three I love this one love and big hugs JayCee x x ("Quote:- Death is the great adventure beside which moon landings and space trips pale into insignificance. Addison Joseph")

Great write Cat. You have such a way with meaningful words...Super. Rosina xena465

WOW ... Your words are amazingly gorgeous !!!!!! I look forward to reading more :) (((HUG)))

Cat, this is wonderful. I don't think you've done a spoken poem yet...this is the one, slowly whispered. Gorgeous! As for the title, I would certainly leave out the (needs a better title), so maybe call it Velvet Flux...nothing wrong with that at all. I do envy how you can be Eddy one day with an evil twisted craft of verse and the next you become an angel...angels are ok...but Eddy is better!! Lol! HS ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- "With all that I am and all that I could be, I walk this earth and yet nobody sees me".

Or maybe Golden's Flux. Truly a great write of your Golden and I was wondering how you were doing with your knee and all that you been through lately. There was alot of imagery wording in here and flowed so well, just like a golden thread of velvet. Soft to the touch and the eyes. Lovely Cat!! Love and miss ya!! Love Mona xoxoxoxo TIME well spent is TIME well lived

Dearest Cat, Oh you had my knees weak, wonderful write i will be back for more! shirley harrison

cat neither you or eddy ever fail , this is wonderful i love some of your word choices like " my stunted reality of quiescent cynicism " "we would drift and glid on laughter " " teaching our traumas to slumber " cat you and these words are awesome ,,,,zigs ,nom too

I see you have a new title, yes it is just as good as Velvet Flux, I love anything you write so I am biased, lol. No changes that I would make to this brilliant piece. Still as grand as ever. Love Lyz. XX

Fits to page just perfect Golden!! Love Mona TIME well spent is TIME well lived

sounds like love is in the air :)

especially 'bewitched am I, gladly compliant by your grace I am exonerated' love judy

HELLO MA'AM, i love the whole poem , but i had to single out these line that captured my attention "like a kiss of redemption to a condemned man" "bewitched am I, gladly compliant" a very smooth poem , you created here, i must confess i love the way you knitted the words together. thansk for sharing. chumfin

i just dropped by for another taste of your magic ,,,zigs

love your word style interwoven skillful a bright read