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Apr 28, 2010
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Awakening Meditation
I came to You in rags
and You loved me,
You said "be beautiful"
I came to You in anger
and You loved me
You handed me a mirror
and said "look inside"
I came to You in sorrow
and You loved me
with nothing but my own beauty.
You come to me in silence.
We walk in beauty,
My Love.
and You loved me,
You said "be beautiful"
I came to You in anger
and You loved me
You handed me a mirror
and said "look inside"
I came to You in sorrow
and You loved me
with nothing but my own beauty.
You come to me in silence.
We walk in beauty,
My Love.
— Kailashana, Apr 28, 2010
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Critiques
Kailashana
16 years 1 month ago
Lol, Indy, you said in one
Kailashana
16 years 1 month ago
I was referring to my
Kailashana
16 years 1 month ago
I wrote this poem a couple
Nordic cloud
16 years 1 month ago
..and you bless us with this little beauty too
Lonnie
16 years 1 month ago
I must admit, The Cream does rise to the top, indeed!
lyz
16 years 1 month ago
Dear A~
Candlewitch
16 years 1 month ago
Dear Anna
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
Dearest Mum
seabhac
16 years 1 month ago
I follow the words
Ross Hamilton Hill
16 years 1 month ago
hi kailash ana
Kailashana
16 years 1 month ago
Vipissana Meditation by Ram
Ross Hamilton Hill
16 years 1 month ago
Hi Ana
Kailashana
16 years 1 month ago
That’s it, Ross, isn’t
Kailashana
16 years 1 month ago
Thank you All. Your