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loved
loved
Apr 27, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

OUR DNA PLEASE

 

 

 

 

OUR DNA PLEASE

 

Mixed DNA

Can’t guarantee

A good pedigree

There’s always a chance

Of ambiguity

And

In any case maternity

Is a fact

And

Paternity is

Hearsay

Have your kids any way

With whomsoever

Half of you

Each one will display

You need to first

Overhaul

Your own DNA


— loved, Apr 27, 2010

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arja

arja

16 years 1 month ago

..cool write! :) ..not much

..cool write! :) ..not much to say.. love your other writes, just don't have the time to comment.. you've really evolved so much.. keep 'em coming!
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 1 month ago

This is my favourite *loved*

This is my favourite *loved* poem. "Paternity is heresay". Love that line in particular. Very cool. lol. ~A "The plain man is familiar with blindness and deafness, and knows from his everyday experience that the look of things is influenced by his senses, but it never occurs to him to regard the whole world as a creation of his senses." ~ Ernst Mach
loved

loved

16 years 1 month ago

thanks all

one five two blank its hearsay no?? good poem for competition how do i post it tell me someone loved
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lyz

16 years 1 month ago

Dear Loved

Clever little vegemite! Well done. As I said, wrong one to ask about comp but I have another poem of yours to read, so off I go. Well written and yes, keep them coming. Lyz. XX