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On A Homeless Man's Death
A homeless man lay dying
On a bleak and wintry day
People purposely avoided him
As if he was in their way
God’s angels watched in wonder
Surely, someone would care
To help this fellow human
But, they only acted unaware
He had helped a threatened woman
He fought to save her life
And the man that tried to harm her
Attacked the homeless man with his knife
People kept on walking
As tears fell down his face
The life poured from inside him
As he prayed for dying grace
Dear Lord, I tried to save her
I think she got away
Be near me as I die, Lord
Help me Lord, I pray
I’m ready Lord, to meet you
My life’s been filled with strife
I have no home to go to
I’ve had a painful life
I’ve been to Vietnam, Lord
My soul is sad and scarred
And living on the street
Is lonely, cold, and hard
Most people, they reject me
They do not understand
And when I leave this street, Lord
Please hold me in your Hands
Then, The Lord said:
My son, I understand you
I never had a home
I was rejected by my people
I was killed by my very own
I know the pain you’ve gone through
I see that no one cares
People can be greedy
Some don’t like to share
That’s why I came to get you
On this bleak and wintry day
I know your heart’s been lonely
I hear you when you pray
I wanted to make sure
They knew how much you cared
That’s why I chose you, son
To save the life I spared
Now come home, my dear child
Your soul is finally free
I’ve been waiting for you
You’ll spend eternity with me
Critiques
the_fool
16 years 1 month ago
touching
wolfycat
16 years 1 month ago
I understand...
the_fool
16 years 1 month ago
wow
wolfycat
16 years 1 month ago
yes.
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
Dear wolfycat
wolfycat
16 years 1 month ago
It is so horrifying...
Nicole Stone
16 years 1 month ago
wolfcat
wolfycat
16 years 1 month ago
It is disturbing...
raj
16 years 1 month ago
Very lively...
wolfycat
16 years 1 month ago
Hi Raj...
raj
16 years 1 month ago
Yes Ofcourse...
shirley harrison
16 years 1 month ago
i have goose bumps!
wolfycat
16 years 1 month ago
Thank you!!
wolfycat
16 years 1 month ago
so very true...