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The Maiden & Her Lover:
My lord is he who leads among the qafilah
A string of shapely maidens
Whose throats are elegant
As the neck of a lute
They are slender, they are slender
And each a crack within my heart
My love is noble as the steed
Who would risk the desert heat for me
He who returns each night
With a flute of pure water
To slake the thirst he has given me
He who would risk the scorpion's malice
The scarab's curse
He who would risk the serpent's caress
For love of me
For love of he my flesh would go unadorned
No kohl may hide my eye from him
No chains of latticed gold
Flow between my golden breasts
My opals are his eyes
My sun and moon at full
My onyx are his black curls
My ruby is the blood that flows
Between him and his enemy
My pearl is the desert milk
That flows from my thighs
My diamonds are the tears
Flowing for him from my eyes
(The Lover Responds In Kind:)
My poetry is the vow that anihilates all
Who stand between us
My love is the promise inscribed
Upon her garment bracelets
In henna written in my every art
My food is the covenant that we shall never part
She is tender, she is tender
She the crack within my heart
Critiques
Kailashana
16 years 1 month ago
This poem is absolutely
raskin
16 years 1 month ago
Maintained the style
shirley harrison
16 years 1 month ago
And over to you!
Ravenshakti
16 years 1 month ago
Hello John...
Dalton
15 years 11 months ago
Dear Raven
amalzamani
16 years 1 month ago
Kafila
Dalton
16 years 1 month ago
only some minor extracts of
amalzamani
16 years 1 month ago
Rabia
Dalton
16 years 1 month ago
Amalzamani
amalzamani
16 years 1 month ago
I don't know many myself
Diatom Shells
16 years ago
What finesse Dalton! This
Dalton
16 years ago
dear Diatom Shells,