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Apr 26, 2010
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Nightdreams
Fragrant moss my only bed
I lie, not really sleeping
willow tree above my head
resolutely weeping
Subtle breezes brush my brow
crickets sing out strong
a lonely loon calls lowly now
adding to the song
Starshine woos the summer sky
with a lovers' touch
and brings to mind a maid that I
once cherished far too much
The night enfolds me in it's arms
I am a child, it seems
succumbing to nocturnal charms
I drift away in dreams
There to visit distant lands
re-living other times
feeling power in my hands
to pen immortal rhymes
I walk on worlds that may have died
and others never born
but a strong, relentless tide
pulls me towards the 'morn
Waking, I embrace the day,
basking in it's light
but come the dusk I'll long to play
once more in realms of night
C. Lon R. Bruso
I lie, not really sleeping
willow tree above my head
resolutely weeping
Subtle breezes brush my brow
crickets sing out strong
a lonely loon calls lowly now
adding to the song
Starshine woos the summer sky
with a lovers' touch
and brings to mind a maid that I
once cherished far too much
The night enfolds me in it's arms
I am a child, it seems
succumbing to nocturnal charms
I drift away in dreams
There to visit distant lands
re-living other times
feeling power in my hands
to pen immortal rhymes
I walk on worlds that may have died
and others never born
but a strong, relentless tide
pulls me towards the 'morn
Waking, I embrace the day,
basking in it's light
but come the dusk I'll long to play
once more in realms of night
C. Lon R. Bruso
— Lonnie, Apr 26, 2010
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Lonnie
16 years 1 month ago
Thank you Sir!
smilecatcher
16 years 1 month ago
nightdreams
Lonnie
16 years 1 month ago
Thanks, Dani!
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
Dear Lonnie
Lonnie
16 years 1 month ago
Thank you, Jayne!
Lonnie
16 years 1 month ago
Thanks, Indi!
Candlewitch
16 years 1 month ago
Dear Lonnie
Lonnie
16 years 1 month ago
Thank you, Cat!
raj
16 years 1 month ago
Hi Mr.Lonnie…wonderful
Lonnie
16 years 1 month ago
Thanks much, my friend!
Hooded Stranger
16 years 1 month ago
Lonnie
Lonnie
16 years 1 month ago
Thanks, HS!
poewriter58
16 years 1 month ago
Lon
Lonnie
16 years 1 month ago
Thank you, Dearest!
Roscoe Lane
16 years 1 month ago
Superb,
Lonnie
16 years 1 month ago
Thanks, Roscoe!
magics02
16 years 1 month ago
Great imagery Lonnie
Lonnie
16 years 1 month ago
Thank you, Mona!
anonymous1
16 years 1 month ago
I can't wait for sleep tonight.
Lonnie
16 years 1 month ago
Thank you so much, Lisa!