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a piece of my book

UNTITLED FOR NOW


BE GONE I PLEAD
BE GONE, I SCREAM WITH ALL THAT LIVES WITHIN ME
ON MY KNEES DEMONS BE GONE AND ALOW ME TO BREATH
ONE SINGLE SOLITARY DAY DIMINISH
SO I MAY LIVE AND FINISH

ON THIS DAWN LEAVE ME AND LEAVE ALONE THE PAIN
THAT YOU FEED FROM
LEAVE THE COUNTLESS HOURS OF RAIN AND UNREST
LEAVE THE TURMOIL THAT I KNOW EXISTS
FORGETT AND FREE THE FEELING THAT LIVES WIYHIN ME
OR THIS LIFE SHALL RISE AND BANISH YOUR EVIL FOR AN ETERNITY

ON THIS COLD AND BROKEN DAWN I MYSELF IN SOLITUDE CONFESS
AND PONDER A THOUGHT AND ALAS I REMINESS
DO I EXIST FOR YOU TO FEED OR DO I LIVE T STRIKE FURY IN YOU WHEN
I LAY DOWN AND DECIEVE YOU
SO COLD YOU BREATH AND DELIVER YOUR GREED
BE GONE I SCREAM AND I SCREAM AGAIN FOR I STAND
I LIVE I BREATH AND I SHALL TODAY LAY DOWN MY ANGER AND BELIEVE

ALONE COLD AND RISING ON THIS DAWN
I FIND SOMETHING THAT CARRIES MORE POWER THAN YOUR GREED
MORE POWER THAN YOU COULD EVER CONCEDE
AND IT IS YOU WHO SHOULD SCREAM FOR I ROSE AND FOUND HER
THE TEARS YOU BRING COULD NEVER MATCH THE POWER OF THE TEARS THAT SHE
COULD BRING
SO BE GONE AND LEAVE IN SHAME FOR I LIVE FOR POWER STRONGER THAN YOU
I ON THIS DAY YOU FAIL BUT ALONE I STILL BLEED
hoping she will find her way home

— reepa, Apr 26, 2010

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Region, Country: Eastern cape, South Africa, ZAF

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xena465

xena465

16 years 1 month ago

Dear reepa

Welcome to Neo...A very powerful write...I like it. Rosina xena465
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reepa

16 years 1 month ago

thanks

Thank you very much, thats not my best im new to the site and thought i would just test. thank you i shall be submitting more, i care nothing for my spelling at the moment, please understand that
xena465

xena465

16 years 1 month ago

Just write from your heart Reepa

What I would suggest though is to read other poets poems and comment on the ones you like. This will help you to make friends and interact with Neo. Rosina xena465