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thewaitingroom
Apr 25, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

THE RAVEN WITH ANIMATED WINGS

The thought of that unknown girl,with words that captivate the souls of many.
Has somehow intrigued this lonesome soul aswell.

The girl that hides behind animated wings,has amazed me in mysterious ways.
Somehow through simple key strokes.

Its things like this that have made me keep writing.
As bad as it may be,she has made it easy for me. No mystery should this be.

So i say what i say to show appreciation. To the one that i hope discovers this someday.
The animated girl with wings will be forever admired from a far ,but close enough to reach........................................................




Just wanted to say thanks!!! you inspire me............................................................................



— thewaitingroom, Apr 25, 2010

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magics02

16 years 1 month ago

The waiting room

I like your write here and look forward to reading more. I am sitting here trying to make out the pic and laughing to myself as I see the figurines in that face now. Your never a lonesome soul as well (if you don't mind me saying aswell is all in one word)do you write short stories as well here, I have been working on some of those and find them to be both challenging more so then the poetry but nontheless inspiring as well. Now I think of your title.. reflecting. The ravens with animated wings and why are they animated. My neighbor hood was named the Ravens Nest and I guess that is because we had many in the neighborhood many years ago. I see some once in a while, but know the sparrows and all the birds of spring are singing their beautiful songs everyday around here, I just love to listen to them. I had a visual when I read this write of yours and I truly enjoyed it. Look forward to reading more of your works. Magics02 TIME well spent is TIME well lived
Ravenshakti

Ravenshakti

16 years 1 month ago

Dear Billy....

Reading this sublime poem brings a sweet warmth to my heart... I can feel my wings, dancing... You are an inspiration too, Billy. Gentle regards, Raven PS And my Ravens say: "Caw!Caw!Caw!" Which in Raven talk means: "We love you!" And this is the most beautiful Song in the world.